Okay so i googled my name just to see what would come up and one of the pages was a poem i wrote about 3 or 4 years ago. This has got to be one of the best ones i've ever done and i forgot that i even had put ot on poetry.com along with a few other poems that i did. One of them being a poem i wrote back in my SR. year of high school titled I'm sorry which was wrote about 8 years ago. Looking at these i realize that my style of writing hasn't changed much in the past 4 or 5 years. It's still very dark and full of despear and pain as you will see. I am gonna post two poems that i think are the best ones i've ever done. This one i am about to post is called my final breath than after i am gonna post one that i wrote just last year.
My Final Breath
I feel the blade cut my skin
releasing all the pain with in
as I see the blood pour out
I wonder what my life was all about
I feel darkness as it surrounds me
knowing in a few seconds i'll be free
with my eyes closed as I try not to cry
I say my silent good bye's
knowing that in my head
I'll miss you all when i'm dead
now the time is here
now there is nothing to fear
knowing nothing is left
as I take my final breath.
All She Wanted
All she wanted was someone to care
But when she looked around no one was there.
Left alone in a world so cold
With little hope left to hold
All she wanted was just to have someone say
That everything would be O-kay
If only for a moment to feel
A love so true and real
But soon everything begins to fade away
Like the dying night in to the day
And the hope dies
Just like the life from her eyes.
Reading these has made me realize that made i should pick up back the pen and start writing again. you know what i think i will
So that's it for now as always for those about to rock I salute you
